Steph steps into the room and looks around, when suddenly Darren jumps out of a closet wearing a scary mask.
- Does the sentence work with "when"?
- What is more natural "...when suddenly Darren jumps..." or "...when Darren suddenly jumps..."?
anonymous Does the sentence work with "when"? Yes. "?
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anonymous Does the sentence work with "when"?
Yes.
anonymous- What is more natural "...when suddenly Darren jumps..." or "...when Darren suddenly jumps..."?
They are equally natural, but the first is more effective in my opinion.
CJ