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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Does the sentence work with "when"?

Steph steps into the room and looks around, when suddenly Darren jumps out of a closet wearing a scary mask.

- Does the sentence work with "when"?

- What is more natural "...when suddenly Darren jumps..." or "...when Darren suddenly jumps..."?

  

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anonymous Does the sentence work with "when"? Yes. "?

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  • anonymous Does the sentence work with "when"?
  • Yes.
  • "?
  • They are equally natural, but the first is more effective in my opinion.
  • CJ
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anonymous Does the sentence work with "when"?

Yes.

anonymous- What is more natural "...when suddenly Darren jumps..." or "...when Darren suddenly jumps..."?

They are equally natural, but the first is more effective in my opinion.

CJ

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