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Wangqh2696122 Posted 14 years ago
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Does the sentence sound natural?
Eilen was a painter of birds and of nature, who, for some reason ,had withdrawn from all human society.
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Too many commas; it slows the narrative too much. You don't need any of them! Eilen was a painter of birds and nature who for some reason had withdrawn from all human society.
- Too many commas; it slows the narrative too much.
- You don't need any of them!
- Eilen was a painter of birds and nature who for some reason had withdrawn from all human society.
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Too many commas; it slows the narrative too much. You don't need any of them!
Eilen was a painter of birds and nature who for some reason had withdrawn from all human society.
Eilen was a painter of birds and nature who for some reason had withdrawn from all human society.
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