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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Does the sentence read well?

Does this sentence read well? Should we change it around?

From what I read, it really doesn't seem like he's going to give in to your demands.

sincere regards
  

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Hi, Your sentence seems OK, except for the "from what I read" part. I suggest this: The way I read it, it really doesn't seem like he's going to give in to your demands. Regards

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  • Hi, Your sentence seems OK, except for the "from what I read" part.
  • I suggest this: The way I read it, it really doesn't seem like he's going to give in to your demands.
  • Regards
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Hi,

Your sentence seems OK, except for the "from what I read" part.

I suggest this:

The way I read it, it really doesn't seem like he's going to give in to your demands.

Regards
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