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Ayan86 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Does the sentence look okay?

Hi there!

Does my sentence look okay gramatically and stylistically? Any suggestions how/what to improve?

This is definitely a place where you can enjoy a romantic dinner and go for a night-time dip in the sea right after... and later to a room in the tasteful Hotel XXX.

Thank you!
  

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To me, it is a bit too sexually suggestive. And my mother told me never to swim right after I eat.

  • To me, it is a bit too sexually suggestive.
  • And my mother told me never to swim right after I eat.
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To me, it is a bit too sexually suggestive.

And my mother told me never to swim right after I eat.

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