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Vijay Marathe Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Does the sentence convey its meaning OK?

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Does the sentence convey its meaning OK?

Due to this distinct advantage we can offer our clients a unique blend of local Chinese knowledge and advice on subtleties of doing business in China, together with a proper comprehension of British companies’ businesses requirements through our UK staff.

Regards,

Vijay
  

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The sentence is somewhat too long and loses the reader in the middle. I would suggest the following but I hope I conveyed your intended meaning. My comments are in red- Due to this distinct advantage, ('this advantage' should have been mentioned in the previous sentence) our UK staff can offer our clients a knowledge of the legal requirements for British companies to conduct business in China and advise on the local business culture.

— AliceW31

  • The sentence is somewhat too long and loses the reader in the middle.
  • I would suggest the following but I hope I conveyed your intended meaning.
  • My comments are in red- Due to this distinct advantage, ('this advantage' should have been mentioned in the previous sentence) our UK staff can offer our clients a knowledge of the legal requirements for British companies to conduct business in China and advise on the local business culture.
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The sentence is somewhat too long and loses the reader in the middle. I would suggest the following but I hope I conveyed your intended meaning. My comments are in red-

Due to this distinct advantage, ('this advantage' should have been mentioned in the previous sentence) our UK staff can offer our clients a knowledge of the legal requirements for British companies to conduct business in
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Your suggestion does sound good.

Thanks,

Vijay
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