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Gillyflower Posted 10 years ago
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Does the following sound good?

Hi,
Does the following sound good?
"What is certain is that no study has investigated the effect of nap on all the eight driving skills together. Other studies have either generally referred to driving skills or, mostly investigated the effect of nap on reaction time."

Thanks!
  

Top answer

The first phrase is useless. No single study has investigated the effects of napping on all eight driving skills. Other studies have either generally referred to driving skills or pri marily investigated the effects of napping on reaction time.

— Mister Micawber

  • The first phrase is useless.
  • No single study has investigated the effects of napping on all eight driving skills.
  • Other studies have either generally referred to driving skills or pri marily investigated the effects of napping on reaction time.
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The first phrase is useless.

No single study has investigated the effects of napping on all eight driving skills. Other studies have either generally referred to driving skills or primarily investigated the effects of napping on reaction time.
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Mister MicawberThe first phrase is useless
This comes following some other sentences. After giving the results of our study, we are trying to compare our findings with those of other studies. Here is the whole paragraph:

"Other studies on the effect of nap on psychomotor skills, however, have shown different results. This can be explained by the metho
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It remains useless, in my opinion.

Please fix the rest of your paragraph in line with the corrections I have given to your initial post.
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Mister MicawberPlease fix the rest of your paragraph in line with the corrections I have given to your initial post.
Could you please explain what I should exactly do?

Many Thanks!
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gillyflowerCould you please explain what I should exactly do?
Look at Mister Micawber's edits on your first sentence. Where you have made the same mistake in your paragraph, apply the same change as Mister Micawber did.
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