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Rathony Posted 11 years ago
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Does the below sentence make sense?
Please tell me if I can use "write" as a verb before the disease. If possible, what will it end up meaning?
You can write the diseases with God given immune systems.
What does it sound like? Does it make any sense to you?
You can write the diseases with God given immune systems.
What does it sound like? Does it make any sense to you?
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Rathony Does it make any sense to you? No. You should explain what it means so that someone can suggest a better, more natural way of writing it.
- Rathony Does it make any sense to you?
- No.
- You should explain what it means so that someone can suggest a better, more natural way of writing it.
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RathonyDoes it make any sense to you?No. You should explain what it means so that someone can suggest a better, more natural way of writing it.
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Could you possibly mean "right"?
Like "right a wrong"?
Even if you did, you don't "right" a disease, though.
Your own immune system will be able to beat this disease. -- Possible rewrite.
"***-given immune system" will be very odd to many people. If you insist on using it, use a hyphen.
Like "right a wrong"?
Even if you did, you don't "right" a disease, though.
Your own immune system will be able to beat this disease. -- Possible rewrite.
"***-given immune system" will be very odd to many people. If you insist on using it, use a hyphen.
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RathonyYou can write the diseases with *** given immune systems.Is this what you mean?
You can fight (off) diseases with your ***-given immune system.
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