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Does "thank you again" make the sentence redundant?

Employee: I would like to get some information on the comensation package. Which compensation packge would be appropriate for me?

HR: (Explanation for the other packages). I'm not sure about package A, but all of the information is on the HR website.

Employee: Thanks a lot! Alright, I'll also look them up on the HR website.

HR: No problem. The website has all of the information.

Employee: Alright. Thanks again.
  

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This is more natural: Employee: I'd like to get some information on the compensation packages. Which one would be appropriate for me? HR: [ Explanation for several packages ] .

— Mister Micawber

  • This is more natural: Employee: I'd like to get some information on the compensation packages.
  • Which one would be appropriate for me?
  • HR: [ Explanation for several packages ] .
  • I'm not sure about package A, but all of the information is on the HR website.
  • Employee: Thanks a lot!
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This is more natural:

Employee: I'd like to get some information on the compensation packages. Which one would be appropriate for me?

HR: [Explanation for several packages]. I'm not sure about package A, but all of the information is on the HR website.

Employee: Thanks a lot! All right, I'll also look them up on
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