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Does the "frustrated Tasslehoff swiftly picked" part of the sentence work and sound good? However, arguments over who would control the dragon orb caused fighting between the different parties until a frustrated Tasslehoff swiftly picked up the artifact and shattered it against the sacred monolith known as the Whitestone.
  

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Anonymous Does the "frustrated Tasslehoff swiftly picked" part of the sentence work and sound good? However, arguments over who would control the dragon orb caused fighting between the different parties until a frustrated Tasslehoff swiftly picked up the artifact and shattered it against the sacred monolith known as the Whitestone. That particular phrase is notable for the prominence of modifiers, but other than that it seems all right to me.

  • Anonymous Does the "frustrated Tasslehoff swiftly picked" part of the sentence work and sound good?
  • However, arguments over who would control the dragon orb caused fighting between the different parties until a frustrated Tasslehoff swiftly picked up the artifact and shattered it against the sacred monolith known as the Whitestone.
  • That particular phrase is notable for the prominence of modifiers, but other than that it seems all right to me.
  • CJ
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Anonymous Does the "frustrated Tasslehoff swiftly picked" part of the sentence work and sound good? However, arguments over who would control the dragon orb caused fighting between the different parties until a frustrated Tasslehoff swiftly picked up the artifact and shattered it against the sacred monolith known as the Whitestone.
That particular phrase is no

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