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JAvA tHe Gamer Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Does my speech contains a bad grammar/english
I have a speech within this week and I would like to ask for your help
Please check my speech because I'm not a native English speaker and Please Check if there's a garbage grammar here.
and lastly, Please Do check my introduction? I felt that there are some mistakes here:
How do men express their feelings?
Maybe we, Men are irritating, but at the same time lovable; mysterious, but at the same time straightforward; and although we seem emotionless, there are many ways we express our feelings. You Girls, when you send a text and don’t get a response or when you go out on a date and he doesn’t show any affection, you may think that men don’t have feelings and don’t care, but deep down, men do. The slightest look or touch that may not seem like a big deal to you can be a huge deal to us. Men might express themselves in the smallest, silliest ways, but you should know about all of the different ways in which men express their feelings.
Most of us are not expressive to our feelings so I listed down here the ways how we express our feelings that you should know about.
1. TAKING ACTION INSTEAD OF SAYING "I LOVE YOU"
Even though we do say "I love you," most of us prefer to show our feelings through actions. Instead of the typical "I love you," We may fix things around the house. We might do anything to rock your world so don’t be worried if we don’t often say "I love you.
2. SINCERELY LISTENING AND RESPONDING
Usually when having a conversation, you’ll give the common, "Mhm," "Yes," "Sure," responses to let the other person know you’re at least listening to them. When you don’t get any response from a man, you usually think he’s not listening, but just because he is not saying anything does not mean that he is not. Because we prefer to listen quietly and actually think about what you are saying. In a case like this, silence may be a good thing and may be our way of effectively listening to you.
3. GIVING YOU GIFTs
This doesn't mean extravagant gifts or buying you things all the time, but if a guy buys you a gift because it reminded him of you that's a good sign. He's trying to express his feelings without actually having to say "I was thinking of you" or "I wanted to show you I care." Sometimes it's nice to hear it, but other times it's enough to just know because of little gestures like this.
In fact there’s a lot of ways how we express our feelings, but I think these are the best ways that you should know about.
So how do men express their feelings? Actually, all men are different but most of men are the type of guy that do not express their feelings expressively, we used to listen and think carefully before we say or make an actions.
It’s important to communicate and be aware and recognize that men do have a way of expressing their feelings. Will you give your beau a #chance to express his feelings the best way that he can? Hmm..
Please check my speech because I'm not a native English speaker and Please Check if there's a garbage grammar here.
and lastly, Please Do check my introduction? I felt that there are some mistakes here:
How do men express their feelings?
Maybe we, Men are irritating, but at the same time lovable; mysterious, but at the same time straightforward; and although we seem emotionless, there are many ways we express our feelings. You Girls, when you send a text and don’t get a response or when you go out on a date and he doesn’t show any affection, you may think that men don’t have feelings and don’t care, but deep down, men do. The slightest look or touch that may not seem like a big deal to you can be a huge deal to us. Men might express themselves in the smallest, silliest ways, but you should know about all of the different ways in which men express their feelings.
Most of us are not expressive to our feelings so I listed down here the ways how we express our feelings that you should know about.
1. TAKING ACTION INSTEAD OF SAYING "I LOVE YOU"
Even though we do say "I love you," most of us prefer to show our feelings through actions. Instead of the typical "I love you," We may fix things around the house. We might do anything to rock your world so don’t be worried if we don’t often say "I love you.
2. SINCERELY LISTENING AND RESPONDING
Usually when having a conversation, you’ll give the common, "Mhm," "Yes," "Sure," responses to let the other person know you’re at least listening to them. When you don’t get any response from a man, you usually think he’s not listening, but just because he is not saying anything does not mean that he is not. Because we prefer to listen quietly and actually think about what you are saying. In a case like this, silence may be a good thing and may be our way of effectively listening to you.
3. GIVING YOU GIFTs
This doesn't mean extravagant gifts or buying you things all the time, but if a guy buys you a gift because it reminded him of you that's a good sign. He's trying to express his feelings without actually having to say "I was thinking of you" or "I wanted to show you I care." Sometimes it's nice to hear it, but other times it's enough to just know because of little gestures like this.
In fact there’s a lot of ways how we express our feelings, but I think these are the best ways that you should know about.
So how do men express their feelings? Actually, all men are different but most of men are the type of guy that do not express their feelings expressively, we used to listen and think carefully before we say or make an actions.
It’s important to communicate and be aware and recognize that men do have a way of expressing their feelings. Will you give your beau a #chance to express his feelings the best way that he can? Hmm..
Top answer
) Maybe we men are irritating, yet at the same time lovable; mysterious, but at the same time straightforward; and although seemingly emotionless, we express our feelings in many ways. You girls*, when you send a text and don’t get a response; or when you go out on a date and he doesn’t show any affection; you may think that men don’t have feelings and don’t care; but deep down, men do. The slightest look or touch – that may not seem like a big deal to you – can be a huge deal to us.
- ) Maybe we men are irritating, yet at the same time lovable; mysterious, but at the same time straightforward; and although seemingly emotionless, we express our feelings in many ways.
- You girls*, when you send a text and don’t get a response; or when you go out on a date and he doesn’t show any affection; you may think that men don’t have feelings and don’t care; but deep down, men do.
- The slightest look or touch – that may not seem like a big deal to you – can be a huge deal to us.
- Men might express themselves in the smallest, silliest ways; but you should be aware of all the different ways in which men express their feelings.
- Most of us are not good at making our feelings known , so I have listed here the ways in which we express our feelings that I think you should know.
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Introduction: (I think ‘girls’ should be upgraded to ‘ladies’ or at least ‘women’.)
Maybe we men are irritating, yet at the same time lovable; mysterious, but at the same time straightforward; and although seemingly emotionless, we express our feelings in many ways. You girls*, when you send a text and don’t get a response; or when you go out on a date and he doesn’t show any affection; you m
Maybe we men are irritating, yet at the same time lovable; mysterious, but at the same time straightforward; and although seemingly emotionless, we express our feelings in many ways. You girls*, when you send a text and don’t get a response; or when you go out on a date and he doesn’t show any affection; you m
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Thank you for correcting some of my wrong grammars.
I've tried to fix the first part PLEASE DO CHECK IT:
How do men express their feelings?
Good Morning ladies and gentlemen,
Have you ever wondered how do men express their feelings? Let’s talk about it
Maybe we, men are irritating, yet at the same time lovable; mysterious, but at the same time straightforward; and alt
I've tried to fix the first part PLEASE DO CHECK IT:
How do men express their feelings?
Good Morning ladies and gentlemen,
Have you ever wondered how do men express their feelings? Let’s talk about it
Maybe we, men are irritating, yet at the same time lovable; mysterious, but at the same time straightforward; and alt
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Here are some suggested grammar changes or corrections to your rewrites:
Have you ever wondered how (do) men express their feelings? (remove “do” in this sentence).
Maybe we men … (remove the comma again.)
The slightest look or touch, that may not seem like a big deal to you, can be a huge deal to us. (note the use of commas to set off the interruption)
Men migh
Have you ever wondered how (do) men express their feelings? (remove “do” in this sentence).
Maybe we men … (remove the comma again.)
The slightest look or touch, that may not seem like a big deal to you, can be a huge deal to us. (note the use of commas to set off the interruption)
Men migh
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What a great help from you sir
Thank you for correcting my mistakes
But will my introduction make my audience interest to my topic?
Is "HAVE YOU EVER WONDERED HOW MEN EXPRESS THEIR FEELINGS" enough?
i feel i need something intro like question that will make it wonderful speech
What is a good closing remark for this?
THANK YOU, you are very hel
Thank you for correcting my mistakes
But will my introduction make my audience interest to my topic?
Is "HAVE YOU EVER WONDERED HOW MEN EXPRESS THEIR FEELINGS" enough?
i feel i need something intro like question that will make it wonderful speech
What is a good closing remark for this?
THANK YOU, you are very hel
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jAvA tHe GamerBut will my introduction make my audience interest to my topic?I somehow feel a woman is only interested in one man – the one she’s targeted! However, I wish you luck!
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