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GrammerConfused Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance
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As a token of appreciation, Jackie would like to invite the entire PAO team for breakfast at IHOP. PAO staff meeting will commence simultaneously at breakfast.
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GrammerConfused As a token of appreciation, Jackie would like to invite the entire PAO team for breakfast at IHOP. PAO staff meeting will commence simultaneously at breakfast. "
- GrammerConfused As a token of appreciation, Jackie would like to invite the entire PAO team for breakfast at IHOP.
- PAO staff meeting will commence simultaneously at breakfast.
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GrammerConfusedAs a token of appreciation, Jackie would like to invite the entire PAO team for breakfast at IHOP. PAO staff meeting will commence simultaneously at breakfast.
"The PAO staff meeting will take place at/during the breakfast."
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Hi,
So it's what we'd call a mandatory rather than an optional invitation to a working breakfast? That doesn't sound much like a token of appreciation to me. It sounds a bit like working overtime.
So it's what we'd call a mandatory rather than an optional invitation to a working breakfast? That doesn't sound much like a token of appreciation to me. It sounds a bit like working overtime.
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Thank you for your help. It's simple, yet concise. Truly appreciated!!
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Hi Clive,
Well, you know, it's one of those meeting breakfast. Meeting is mandatory, but the breakfast is out of convenience. Killing two birds with one stone. Thanks for the honesty. I can't think of any other way to write the announcement.
Well, you know, it's one of those meeting breakfast. Meeting is mandatory, but the breakfast is out of convenience. Killing two birds with one stone. Thanks for the honesty. I can't think of any other way to write the announcement.
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How about "The PAO staff meeting will be on [Monday] at the IHOP, starting promptly at [8] a.m. As a token of appreciation for your hard work, Jackie will be treating the team to breakfast."
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