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Spooner Posted 14 years ago
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Does my sentence sound native?
I would greatly appreciate it if someone could point out any non-idiomatic expressions or structural problems in the sentence and, hopefully, gave me suggestions on how to fix it.
However, if you are having a pain in the area that is not visible, you are more likely to leave it susceptible to infection through the engagement in careless and unadvisable activities such as drinking and smoking excessively and eating unhealthy food - even after alerting symptoms have already appeared.
Thanks.
However, if you are having a pain in the area that is not visible, you are more likely to leave it susceptible to infection through the engagement in careless and unadvisable activities such as drinking and smoking excessively and eating unhealthy food - even after alerting symptoms have already appeared.
Thanks.
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However, if you have pain in an area that is not visible, you are more likely to leave it open to increased aggravation through careless and unadvisable activities such as drinking and smoking excessively or eating unhealthy food—even after alerting symptoms have appeared.
- However, if you have pain in an area that is not visible, you are more likely to leave it open to increased aggravation through careless and unadvisable activities such as drinking and smoking excessively or eating unhealthy food—even after alerting symptoms have appeared.
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However, if you have pain in an area that is not visible, you are more likely to leave it open to increased aggravation through careless and unadvisable activities such as drinking and smoking excessively or eating unhealthy food—even after alerting symptoms have appeared.
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