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Dominique1313 Posted 10 years ago
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Does my sentence make sense?

"...a completely fulfilling relationship that brings me to receive everything that I want to receive, and give everything that I want to give, in the relationship - such as affection, care, intimacy, attention, etc. - , all of it at the level I desire"
  

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It's incomplete. What is missing from the front?

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It's incomplete. What is missing from the front?
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"I want a completely fulfilling relationship that brings me to receive everything that I want to receive, and give everything that I want to give, in the relationship - such as affection, care, intimacy, attention, etc. - , all of it at the level I desire"
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Hello,

I was just just wondering if my sentence was understandable
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Dominique1313relationship that brings me to receive
I'd change 'brings' to 'allows' to make it more idiomatic. Otherwise, OK from the standpoint of being understandable.

CJ
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