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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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They share the power hungry notion that manifested the world in the early twentieth century.
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Does my sentence make sense? Not really. You used "manifested" incorrectly.
- Does my sentence make sense?
- Not really.
- You used "manifested" incorrectly.
- Did you mean something more like "permeated" or "was widespread in"?
- It would also help if you said who "they" were and what power-hungry notion you were talking about.
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Does my sentence make sense?
Not really. You used "manifested" incorrectly. Did you mean something more like "permeated" or "was widespread in"?
It would also help if you said who "they" were and what power-hungry notion you were talking about.
CJ
Not really. You used "manifested" incorrectly. Did you mean something more like "permeated" or "was widespread in"?
It would also help if you said who "they" were and what power-hungry notion you were talking about.
CJ
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