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00Dear Sirs,02br
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00This is to follow my Application form to accompany my admission to the Master’s program in Business Information Systems at the Technische Universiteit .02br
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00I graduated in Records management and records support for management, major in Information Technology, in December 2006 from the X University, in CITY, COUNTRY. My thesis was an implementation project of Information management procedures for a real enterprise in COUNTRY I’ve been working for during three years. 02br
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00For the last three and a half years I work for an international project of XXX. Working in western business environment and being subordinate and a colleague to many Europeans and Americans helped me to become fluent in speaking and written English, to get to know advanced business practices, to establish myself as a purposeful person doing my best to achieve my personal and company goals. 02br
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00Being a XX citizen I'm informed that lack of knowledge of Business Information issues is evident in this part of the world. Joining the global business environment COUNTRY clearly needs specialists able to deliver at a high edge of standards. 02br
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00Technische Universiteit is one of the leading universities in Europe. TU has a highly recognized Masters’ programs, which is one of the main reasons why I would like to be a part of the Business Information System Master’s program. Studying in TU will provide me with opportunities to strengthen myself as a problem-solver with the ability to design new products, processes and systems. 02br
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00During all my work experience I’ve been working to improve present traditions and procedures of Information management. I have learned to analyze business processes and their influence on the final results of the company. I also gained important knowledge of data lifecycle and flow. Participation in real projects helped me to make my theoretical knowledge become a work experience. Moreover I always have to challenge COUNTRY tradition for being mainly men occupied in this field of business. 02br
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00I’m highly motivated to pursue my studies in Business Information Systems Master’s program. With a solid foundation in academic and work experience in Business Information Systems, I an confident that I will have skills, knowledge, experience, and contacts that will open visible perspectives for me to achieve desirable career in Business information management and, hopefully, increase the general level of business traditions in Information management in COUNTRY.02br
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00Thank you in advance for considering me as a candidate. I look forward for your positive response.02br
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00Yours sincerely,0-