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TreeView Posted 13 years ago

Does it sound stupid or weird for englishspeaker?

Why can't you hear my voice? and
Why do you repulse perfection?
There's no another choice.
I celebrate my liberation.

You're just a boring and
defective meaningless creation.
That is why I begin
my own way to liberation.
  

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TreeView Does it sound stupid or weird for englishspeaker? Not really, but it does sound adolescent.

— Mister Micawber

  • TreeView Does it sound stupid or weird for englishspeaker?
  • Not really, but it does sound adolescent.
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TreeViewDoes it sound stupid or weird for englishspeaker?
Not really, but it does sound adolescent.
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Mister Micawber but it does sound adolescent.
Thanks for your answer! What does it mean "adolescent"? I'm trying to write a song, and could you tell me what to imrove? Thank you!
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What do you mean with "Why do you repulse perfection"?

At first, the speaker seems to have specific expectations of a certain someone and sounds frustrated that they're not being met, then suddenly (s)he celebrates the separation from that person.

Seems a bit paradoxical, in my humble opinion.
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StrangegalWhat do you mean with "Why do you repulse perfection"?
That' s the full lyrics

I love you. You loved me.
I want you to be always mine.
But we're stuck in the rambling,
Chaotic thicket of my mind.
I can't bear the nightmare
that I would never have desired.
I see your amazement
Well, darling, please, just tell me
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