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Ritinha Posted 21 years ago
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Does it sound ok?
Does it sound ok? or can be improved?
1) It was verified that since May 2004, Group IT has included an IT awareness session within the Group induction.
2) This IT session promotes the use of IT tools and resources more efficiently by staff.
3) Due to the importance of these awareness sessions and to ensure the efficient use of the IT resources, it is recommended to develop in the near future an IT refresher session to track the staff who joined the company before May 2004 and/or to communicate the new IT developments, (namely the ones directly related to staff and their operations).
I would appreciate if you could give me your opinion.
Thanks in advance,
Ritinha
1) It was verified that since May 2004, Group IT has included an IT awareness session within the Group induction.
2) This IT session promotes the use of IT tools and resources more efficiently by staff.
3) Due to the importance of these awareness sessions and to ensure the efficient use of the IT resources, it is recommended to develop in the near future an IT refresher session to track the staff who joined the company before May 2004 and/or to communicate the new IT developments, (namely the ones directly related to staff and their operations).
I would appreciate if you could give me your opinion.
Thanks in advance,
Ritinha
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Hello Ritinha Here's my version: 1) It was confirmed that since May 2004, Group IT had included an IT awareness session as part of the Group induction. 2) This IT session promotes the more efficient use of IT tools and resources by staff. e.
- Hello Ritinha Here's my version: 1) It was confirmed that since May 2004, Group IT had included an IT awareness session as part of the Group induction.
- 2) This IT session promotes the more efficient use of IT tools and resources by staff.
- e.
- those directly related to staff and their operations).
- MrP
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Hello Ritinha
Here's my version:
1) It was confirmed that since May 2004, Group IT had included an IT awareness session as part of the Group induction.
2) This IT session promotes the more efficient use of IT tools and resources by staff.
3) To emphasise the importance of these awareness sessions and to ensure the efficient use of IT resources, an IT refr
Here's my version:
1) It was confirmed that since May 2004, Group IT had included an IT awareness session as part of the Group induction.
2) This IT session promotes the more efficient use of IT tools and resources by staff.
3) To emphasise the importance of these awareness sessions and to ensure the efficient use of IT resources, an IT refr
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