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COUME Posted 22 years ago
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Does it sound ok?
Hello,
I tried to write a small news, and its aimed is to bring the visitors to go deeper into our Web site, consequently I have to make sure it sounds English and interesting
could you give me your point of view?
A new Web analytics tool is available to the English-spoken community! Being a key player in France, *** is proud to announce its entry on the English market. We are delighted to make you discover our innovative features and services.
thxs in advance
Ludo, the French trainee exploited by his boss
I tried to write a small news, and its aimed is to bring the visitors to go deeper into our Web site, consequently I have to make sure it sounds English and interesting
could you give me your point of view?
A new Web analytics tool is available to the English-spoken community! Being a key player in France, *** is proud to announce its entry on the English market. We are delighted to make you discover our innovative features and services.
thxs in advance
Ludo, the French trainee exploited by his boss
Top answer
Hi, the sentence u have mentioned will work but it needs just few changes which i will denote using Uppercase letter: A new Web-analytics tool is available to the English-spoken community! Being a key player in France, *** is proud to announce its entry IN the English market. We are delighted to HELP you discover our innovative features and services.
- Hi, the sentence u have mentioned will work but it needs just few changes which i will denote using Uppercase letter: A new Web-analytics tool is available to the English-spoken community!
- Being a key player in France, *** is proud to announce its entry IN the English market.
- We are delighted to HELP you discover our innovative features and services.
- hope that helps.
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Hi,
the sentence u have mentioned will work but it needs just few changes which i will denote using Uppercase letter:
A new Web-analytics tool is available to the English-spoken community! Being a key player in France, *** is proud to announce its entry IN the English market. We are delighted to HELP you discover our innovative features and services.
hope
the sentence u have mentioned will work but it needs just few changes which i will denote using Uppercase letter:
A new Web-analytics tool is available to the English-spoken community! Being a key player in France, *** is proud to announce its entry IN the English market. We are delighted to HELP you discover our innovative features and services.
hope
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