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With reference to Mrs. Graia Corsei's email dated 5, July, 2007 regarding the flight details of your specialists' arrival which is tomorrow on 10th July 2007. We would like to draw your attention to the fact that we have gone along way in maintenance program for the above-mentioned equipment by our staff and we are now in the final stage.So as the overhauling is being finalized we see no reasons for the coming of your specialists.

Clive · Accepted Answer

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With reference to Mrs. Graia Corsei's email dated 5, July, 2007, regarding the flight details of your specialists' arrival which is due tomorrow, 10^th July 2007, we would like to draw your attention to the fact that our staff have gone a long way in the maintenance program for the above-mentioned equipment (where was it mentioned above/) and we are now in the final stage.

So, as the overhauling is being finalized, we see no reasons for the coming of your specialists. If these are real dates, it seems very late to tell these people not to come!

Best wishes, Clive

does it sound nice

With reference to Mrs. Graia Corsei's email dated 5, July, 2007 regarding the flight details of your specialists' arrival which is tomorrow on 10^th July 2007.

We would like to draw your attention to the fact that we have gone along way in maintenance program for the above-mentioned equipment by our staff and we are now in the final stage.

So as the overhauling is being finalized we see no reasons for the coming of your specialists.

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