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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Does it sound good to your ears?
Hello everyone,
I just translated what you'll find below and thought you could give your opinion or corrections if necessary.
Here it is:
Mission
xxx is a private institution leader in processes of well-rounded education, which orients its efforts towards exceeding both students and parents’ expectations by maintaining an excellent school environment. It permanently emphasizes on innovation, academic excellence and quality in all its processes through a close and constant monitoring, along with committed, trained and professionally capable teachers, and a suitable infrastructure and technological advances.
P.S: The original text was in Spanish and I had a very hard time understanding what it really meant.
Thank you in advance for your help.
E-
I just translated what you'll find below and thought you could give your opinion or corrections if necessary.
Here it is:
Mission
xxx is a private institution leader in processes of well-rounded education, which orients its efforts towards exceeding both students and parents’ expectations by maintaining an excellent school environment. It permanently emphasizes on innovation, academic excellence and quality in all its processes through a close and constant monitoring, along with committed, trained and professionally capable teachers, and a suitable infrastructure and technological advances.
P.S: The original text was in Spanish and I had a very hard time understanding what it really meant.
Thank you in advance for your help.
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Top answer
What works in Spanish does not seem to work well in English. It needs a major overhaul to seem natural: ***, a private institution leade education , is committed to exceeding both student and parent expectations by maintaining a superlative school environment with a strong infrastructure and cutting-edge technology. *** emphasizes innovation , academic excellence and quality in all its activities through careful monitoring and committed professional educator s.
- What works in Spanish does not seem to work well in English.
- It needs a major overhaul to seem natural: ***, a private institution leade education , is committed to exceeding both student and parent expectations by maintaining a superlative school environment with a strong infrastructure and cutting-edge technology.
- *** emphasizes innovation , academic excellence and quality in all its activities through careful monitoring and committed professional educator s.
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What works in Spanish does not seem to work well in English. It needs a major overhaul to seem natural:
***, a private institution leade education, is committed to exceeding both student and parent expectations by maintaining a superlative school environment with a strong infrastructure and cutting-edge technology. *** emphasizes innovation, acad
***, a private institution leade education, is committed to exceeding both student and parent expectations by maintaining a superlative school environment with a strong infrastructure and cutting-edge technology. *** emphasizes innovation, acad
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Thank you very much. I totally agree with you... translating isn't an easy task to do though.
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