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ItalianGirl Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

does it sound good?

I need your help, are there mistakes on the following text?

- ATTENTION PLEASE,

THE COVERED PARKING IS PRIVATE, NOBODY IS ALLOWED TO PARK IN THIS SPACE. THE CARS FOUND IN THE COVERED PARKING WILL BE CLAMPED AND REMOVED. FOR A BETTER SERVICE PUT YOUR CAR IN THE UNCOVERED PARKING IN FRONT OF RECEPTION -

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MAYBE, THE PARKING lot IS a PRIVATE property. NOBODY IS ALLOWED TO be parked. THE CARS FOUND IN THE lot WILL BE towed.

— Welkins2139

  • MAYBE, THE PARKING lot IS a PRIVATE property.
  • NOBODY IS ALLOWED TO be parked.
  • THE CARS FOUND IN THE lot WILL BE towed.
  • FOR A BETTER SERVICE please leave YOUR CAR IN FRONT OF the parking lot RECEPTION.
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MAYBE,

THE PARKING lot IS a PRIVATE property. NOBODY IS ALLOWED TO be parked. THE CARS FOUND IN THE lot WILL BE towed. FOR A BETTER SERVICE please leave YOUR CAR IN FRONT OF the parking lot RECEPTION.
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As a printed notice or as part of a brochure given to guests:

Please note that covered parking is reserved.
Do not park in covered parking or your car will be towed.
Please use uncovered parking in front of reception.
Thank you.

As a sign:

On the ground just a little behind where the back wheels of the car might go, in white letters on a blac
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My boss wrote this to be annouced . Thank you for your advices.
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Then I would choose the same words as for a printed brochure, but you can begin with, "May I have your attention, please!"

CJ
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