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0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 If the following order of actions happened in a story: 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 ( a woman rose from her bed, then went to her kids' bed ,then kissed them one after the other, then packed some clothes then opened the door, and finally stepped outwards to the darkness) 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 So,does the following sentences express the same idea in a good Englih or not: 02 font 02 br 02 br 00 " 01 b 00 One night, she rose from her bed and went to the kids'. " 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 01 i 00 _____________________________ 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 Generally speaking, this is not bad, but it sounds a little like the kissing and the packing were done at the same time. 02 br 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 " 00 One night, she rose from her bed and went to the kids'.
- 0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 If the following order of actions happened in a story: 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 ( a woman rose from her bed, then went to her kids' bed ,then kissed them one after the other, then packed some clothes then opened the door, and finally stepped outwards to the darkness) 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 So,does the following sentences express the same idea in a good Englih or not: 02 font 02 br 02 br 00 " 01 b 00 One night, she rose from her bed and went to the kids'.
- " 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 01 i 00 _____________________________ 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 Generally speaking, this is not bad, but it sounds a little like the kissing and the packing were done at the same time.
- 02 br 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 " 00 One night, she rose from her bed and went to the kids'.
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001 cite 10 OrcaDeen 12 cite 10 One night, she rose from her bed and went to the kids'. Kissing them one after the other, she packed some of their close-fitting clothes, then opened the door and stepped outwards to the darkness." 12 blockquote10 One night, she rose from her bed and went to the kids' 01 span
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