Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Does it need a comma?
Making sure I provide the best service possible is key in order to assure that business continues to be progressive.
or
Making sure I provide the best service possible is key, in order to assure that business continues to be progressive.
or
Making sure I provide the best service possible is key, in order to assure that business continues to be progressive.
Top answer
No, it doesn't need a comma, but it is still too loosely written. Providing the best service possible is key to our business success.
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No, it doesn't need a comma, but it is still too loosely written.
Providing the best service possible is key to our business success.
Providing the best service possible is key to our business success.
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Thank you! It sounds loosely written because it is a general statement within a cover letter I'm writing, not about a specific business.
would this work as well:
I am a highly self-motivated individual that takes pride in improving customer relations within my company; making sure I provide the best service possible is key in order to assure that business continues to be progress
would this work as well:
I am a highly self-motivated individual that takes pride in improving customer relations within my company; making sure I provide the best service possible is key in order to assure that business continues to be progress
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No, that would not work as well.
I am a highly self-motivated individual who takes pride in customer relations; providing the best service possible is key to ensuring that a business succeeds.
I am a highly self-motivated individual who takes pride in customer relations; providing the best service possible is key to ensuring that a business succeeds.
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