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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Does it need a comma?

Making sure I provide the best service possible is key in order to assure that business continues to be progressive.

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Making sure I provide the best service possible is key, in order to assure that business continues to be progressive.
  

Top answer

No, it doesn't need a comma, but it is still too loosely written. Providing the best service possible is key to our business success.

— Mister Micawber

  • No, it doesn't need a comma, but it is still too loosely written.
  • Providing the best service possible is key to our business success.
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No, it doesn't need a comma, but it is still too loosely written.

Providing the best service possible is key to our business success.
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Thank you! It sounds loosely written because it is a general statement within a cover letter I'm writing, not about a specific business.

would this work as well:

I am a highly self-motivated individual that takes pride in improving customer relations within my company; making sure I provide the best service possible is key in order to assure that business continues to be progress
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No, that would not work as well.

I am a highly self-motivated individual who takes pride in customer relations; providing the best service possible is key to ensuring that a business succeeds.
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That sounds much better! Thank you sir!
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