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Mehrdadsin Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Does it make sense? use of "as"

This controversy art offended Christians and irreverence
their beliefs by using Jesus Christ's statue in indecent behavior as a piece of
art.
  

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The sentence does not make much sense as is. Try something like this: This controversial piece of art offended Christians and showed irreverence for their beliefs by presenting Jesus Christ's image behaving indecently.

— Mister Micawber

  • The sentence does not make much sense as is.
  • Try something like this: This controversial piece of art offended Christians and showed irreverence for their beliefs by presenting Jesus Christ's image behaving indecently.
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The sentence does not make much sense as is. Try something like this:

This controversial piece of art offended Christians and showed irreverence for their beliefs by presenting Jesus Christ's image behaving indecently.
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Thank you,
What about this one:

This controversial art offended Christians by depicted Jesus Chris in an indecent act.

Copyright note: I got part of this sentence from Grammer Geek.
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This controversial art work offended Christians by depicting Jesus Christ in an indecent act.

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