Does it make sense?
Tell me, Explain me please who resides inside me.
While I feel broken and tamed, you distort my necrotic smile .
In the darkest times, the insanity reigns over me.However, Is futile trying to uncover it's face.
This unknown who lives inside me is always disguised as a knife, as hope and even as me.
I am still walking in the park wondering if goes insane is the elysium of my agony or if I'm just knocking on the hades's door.
Please don't bother looking for me.In case that I become more transparent than I already am I kindly advise you to forget me for once and
it will hopefully be painless.
We've changed and i don't think its possible for us to back the way we were before. Are you there? Could you benevolently tell me if "ope"
Starts with H or R ??
Top answer
This is very good writing for an adult learner. It's understandable. There are a few minor grammatical, punctuation, and syntactical errors, which I personally would correct as follows: Line no.
- This is very good writing for an adult learner.
- It's understandable.
- There are a few minor grammatical, punctuation, and syntactical errors, which I personally would correct as follows: Line no.
- 1.
- " 2.
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This is very good writing for an adult learner. It's understandable. There are a few minor grammatical, punctuation, and syntactical errors, which I personally would correct as follows:
Line no.
1. "..., explain to me..."
2. This is okay.
3. "However, it's futile trying..."
4. "...is always disguised, as a knife, as hope, and even as me."
5. "...
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