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Changeling Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

does it make sense?

Hi everybody!

I’m writing an article about sports food. Could you, please, check if my sentence makes sense? I want to convey that sports foods I’m writing about are made using natural products.
Here is the sentence: These sports food products are not artificial or man-made.

Thanks in advance
  

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It might be better to say: These sports foods are 100% natural, containing no artificial or man-made ingredients.

  • It might be better to say: These sports foods are 100% natural, containing no artificial or man-made ingredients.
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It might be better to say: These sports foods are 100% natural, containing no artificial or man-made ingredients.

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