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Egyptian2007 Posted 19 years ago
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01i00“The head teacher does not have the status he deserves. If he were a leader in his school as they are saying, he would have been given the freedom…The ‘one-decision-for-all’ approach will never succeed for what is convenient to a school in Cairo may not be to another school somewhere else. So, more freedom should be given to the head teacher if we want to get a good product. There should be space for creativity”.02i0-
  

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11i10“The head teacher does not have the status he deserves. If he were a leader in his school as they are saying, he would have been given the freedom10…10The ‘one-
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01cite10Egyptian200712cite10Yes. I have removed a bit which I thought irrelevant. 10Is there anything wrong?10 12blockquote
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