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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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When the girl broke her ankle the pain she endured was terrible.
  

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HI, the sentence is correct , but which question ?

  • HI, the sentence is correct , but which question ?
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HI,

the sentence is correct , but which question ?
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Hello,

It's not a question, it's a statement. Here's my version:

«When the girl broke her ankle she neither cried nor swooned. Although the pain was terrible she endured it.»
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«When the girl broke her ankle a terrible pain pierced her whole leg, but she endured it.»

In your original sentence the word "endure" is first used when describing the pain, which is ki

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