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Pupil Posted 9 years ago
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Hello there. I deceided to translate a small dialogue into English. It was taken from a TV series. Do the sentences look natural? Could you correct, please.

M: - Well, we could not meet yesterday, but today we have spent much time together. Did you like the film? W: - It was excellent. I have not had so much fun for a long time. M: - Curiously, in my opinion it was the cool horror movie. You were not scared at all, were you? W: - I was a little scared for you.

  

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Did you translate this from another language? Oe example for correction. "In my opinion the horror movie was cool".

  • Did you translate this from another language?
  • Oe example for correction.
  • "In my opinion the horror movie was cool".
  • In speaking it is more natural to speak in short form.
  • couldn't,we've, haven't.
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Did you translate this from another language? . Oe example for correction. "In my opinion the horror movie was cool". In speaking it is more natural to speak in short form. couldn't,we've, haven't.


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My version for comparison:

M: - Well, we couldn't meet yesterday, but we've spent a lot of time together today. How did you like the film?
W: - It was great. I haven't had so much fun in a long time.
M: - Strangely, I thought it was a cool horror movie. But you weren't scared at all, were you?
W: - I was a little scared — for you.

CJ

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