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Mira17 Posted 11 years ago
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does anyone can help me to correct mistakes in these sentences ? please

Mira17 I have work experience as a personal banker for 4 years. I helped certain clients manage their assets, including mortgages, savings, checking and money market accounts and examines a client's assets, suggests additional banking services, and offers solutions when consulted about financial needs. I have gaind experience to gain new clients and sell new products of bank.
  

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I have four years of work experience as a personal banker, assisting clients in examining and managing their assets, including mortgages, savings, checking and money market accounts, suggesting additional banking services, and offering solutions when consulted about financial needs. I have experience in acquiring new clients and selling new bank products.

  • I have four years of work experience as a personal banker, assisting clients in examining and managing their assets, including mortgages, savings, checking and money market accounts, suggesting additional banking services, and offering solutions when consulted about financial needs.
  • I have experience in acquiring new clients and selling new bank products.
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I have four years of work experience as a personal banker, assisting clients in examining and managing their assets, including mortgages, savings, checking and money market accounts, suggesting additional banking services, and offering solutions when consulted about financial needs. I have experience in acquiring new clients and selling new bank products.
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