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Ssmm Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Does anyone advise me this sentence is error free or not?

· Supervised training supporting staffs and ensure delivered high quality standard of training.
  

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You have mixed in three different verb tenses. Pick one and apply it to all of the verbs. Staff is a non-count noun.

  • You have mixed in three different verb tenses.
  • Pick one and apply it to all of the verbs.
  • Staff is a non-count noun.
  • It is always staff, not staffs.
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You have mixed in three different verb tenses. Pick one and apply it to all of the verbs.

Staff is a non-count noun. It is always staff, not staffs.
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Nona The Brit
You have mixed in three different verb tenses. Pick one and apply it to all of the verbs.

Staff is a non-count noun. It is always staff, not staffs.

How about " Supervised training staff to ensure high quality training."
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That makes sense to me. I would probably hyphenate "high-quality" but that is debatable.

But it's not a very strong statement. Something like "Supervised training staff, ensuring development and delivery of effective training programs."
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Dear Grammar Geek,

Thank you very much for your editing, but I have a problem to understand why we have to use "Supervised" at the beginning but "ensuring" not "ensured" for this sentance. Is there any Grammatic rule? Can you teach me?

Ssmm
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It's a depending clause. I set my alarm clock, thus ensuring I would wake up in time for work. I saved all winter, thus ensuring that I would have enough money for my spring vacation. I supervised the team, ensuring they did a good job.

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