Does a person's character determine the person's sucess in life? Anyone please check my essay.

Character does not determines the person's sucess in life. The thing that matter is only "hardwork" and the determination towards to achieve anything.My stance will be proved with the elaboration of some examples which can be elucidated in my further paragraphs.
Firstly, Inventor of Blub, Thomas Edison .In his earlier age of his life He was too stupid to learn anything. Work was not better so he was fired from his job for not productive enough. Even as an inventor , He made thousands of unsucessful attemps.His hardwork and the determination toward inventing bulb leads him to suceeded in his life.
Moreover , Lord of Animated Cartoon Character , Walt disney .He rakes in billion from merchandise. He was terminated from his position stated that " he is not creative " but working hard with the determination to suceed.He sketched the most realistic cartoon characters which were applauded in whole world. No one knew about his character.
In conclusion . It is clear from my above examples that character does not matter in person's success in life.