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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
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doctored, wedding/marriage, food/meal

I don't know who doctored poison in the wedding/marriage feast food/meal. It killed 30 people who attended the wedding reception.

Please correct my sentence.
  

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User_gary I don't know who doctored put poison in the wedding/marriage feast food/meal . It killed 30 people who attended the wedding reception. Please correct my sentence.

— Feebs11

  • User_gary I don't know who doctored put poison in the wedding/marriage feast food/meal .
  • It killed 30 people who attended the wedding reception.
  • Please correct my sentence.
  • The rest of the sentence is ok.
  • You can use either of your alternatives.
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User_garyI don't know who doctored put poison in the wedding/marriage feast food/meal. It killed 30 people who attended the wedding reception.

Please correct my sentence.
The rest of the sentence is ok. You can use either of your alternatives.
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Feebs11
User_garyI don't know who doctored put poison in the wedding/marriage feast food/meal. It killed 30 people who attended the wedding reception.

Please correct my sentence.

The rest of the sentence is ok. You can use either of your alternatives.
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You cannot use "doctored" with poison. Say "poisoned".

You can say the "Wedding feast food".

The wedding feast food was poisoned.
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