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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 10 years ago
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Born in 1980 in [the birth place], [the name] went to X high school in [name of the country]. After receiving his BA in Biology from X University in 2002, he pursued his MA Degree in Anatomy and obtained his assistant ship in the School of Medicine at X University at the same year. He started his doctoral degree in the same programme in 2006 and obtained Anatomy doctorate in 2011.

He became an assistant professor in Anatomy Division at X University in 1980. Besides being one of the teaching staffs at X University, he also served as an assistant manager. Assistant Professor [the name] joined X University in September 2015 teaching Anatomy classes in Anatomy Division of the School of Medicine.
  

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Born in 1980 in [the birth place], [the name] went to X high school in [name of the country]. After receiving his BA in Biology from X University in 2002, he pursued his MA (d egree ) in Anatomy and obtained did his assista nts hip in the School of Medicine at X University at the same year. He started his doctoral degree in the same programme in 2006 and obtained a doctorate in Anatomy doctorate in 2011.

  • Born in 1980 in [the birth place], [the name] went to X high school in [name of the country].
  • After receiving his BA in Biology from X University in 2002, he pursued his MA (d egree ) in Anatomy and obtained did his assista nts hip in the School of Medicine at X University at the same year.
  • He started his doctoral degree in the same programme in 2006 and obtained a doctorate in Anatomy doctorate in 2011.
  • He became an assistant professor in the Department of Anatomy Division at X University in 1980.
  • Besides being one of the teaching staf f at X University, he also served as an assistant manager there .
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Born in 1980 in [the birth place], [the name] went to X high school in [name of the country]. After receiving his BA in Biology from X University in 2002, he pursued his MA (degree) in Anatomy and obtained did his assistantship in the School of Medicine at X University at the same year. He started his doctoral degree in the same programme in 2006 a

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