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Pen olive 896 Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Do you wish you could play any musical instrument?

I would some day love to play drums. I really get gooze bumps when I see a drummer. I mean there is so much to do in that instruments, you need to beat on those different drums and then tap your feet to get that perfect rhythm and that sound. It is great to hear that base in the song, so yes, I would love to be a good drummer some day.

  

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You make a lot of mistakes with the comma . Do not use a comma to join main clauses together. That is an error called the comma splice.

  • You make a lot of mistakes with the comma .
  • Do not use a comma to join main clauses together.
  • That is an error called the comma splice.
  • I would some day love to play drums someday .
  • I really get goosebumps gooze bumps when I see a drummer.
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You make a lot of mistakes with the comma. Do not use a comma to join main clauses together. That is an error called the comma splice.


I would some day love to play drums someday. I really get goosebumps

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