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Wang.cupid Posted 16 years ago
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Do you think these 3 sentences are logically and grammatically correct? Thanks.

The following part is used in my essay to prove that the equal numbers of males and females should be enrolled in every subject. What do you think of it?

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Further, consider these positive changes to universities. Common sense informs me that mixing male
and female students helps them to work more efficiently, thereby promoting academic progress and
exchanges. It goes without saying universities embrace these changes.
  

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Further, consider these positive changes to universitie s: common sense tells us that mixing male and female students helps them to work more efficiently, thereby promoting academic progress and exchange . It goes without saying that universities embrace these changes. I have fixed your structure, but I cannot fix your logic.

  • Further, consider these positive changes to universitie s: common sense tells us that mixing male and female students helps them to work more efficiently, thereby promoting academic progress and exchange .
  • It goes without saying that universities embrace these changes.
  • I have fixed your structure, but I cannot fix your logic.
  • You have offered no rationale whatsoever here for coeducational programs.
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Further, consider these positive changes to universities: common sense tells us that mixing male and female students helps them to work more efficiently, thereby promoting academic progress and exchange. It goes without saying that universities embrace these changes.

I have fixed your structure, but I cannot fix your logic. You have offered no rationale wh

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