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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Many times during my course of study I’ve worked in team and I’ve developed different kind of skills that allowed me working in peacefulness and efficiently way. In addiction during my 6 months of exchange program in Beijing I often collaborated with people from different nationalities and different cultures and thanks to them I opened my mind even when the methods were totally different from those I was accustomed. I understood in these 6 months in China how important is it to fix problem by yourself and to trust each other.
  

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It is a good sentiment but too casually expressed. I have frequently worked in teams, and I have developed skills in efficiency and cooperation. During my six-month exchange program in Beijing, I collaborated with colleagues of other nationalities and cultures and discovered approaches quite different from those to which I had been accustomed.

  • It is a good sentiment but too casually expressed.
  • I have frequently worked in teams, and I have developed skills in efficiency and cooperation.
  • During my six-month exchange program in Beijing, I collaborated with colleagues of other nationalities and cultures and discovered approaches quite different from those to which I had been accustomed.
  • I also learned how important is it to take responsibility for solving problems oneself while working with and relying upon one's teammates.
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It is a good sentiment but too casually expressed.

I have frequently worked in teams, and I have developed skills in efficiency and cooperation. During my six-month exchange program in Beijing, I collaborated with colleagues of other nationalities and cultures and discovered approaches quite different from those to which I had been accustomed. I also learned how important is it to take
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thank you. Do you find any grammatical errors?
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I have fixed the problems: compare the two.

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