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Sam28 Posted 13 years ago
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We all born with the same resource and from the same source. What makes certain people great from others is how do they effectively use their mind. Mind is like a garden it would give you some beautiful flowers more than what you expected if you know how to cultivate them properly that is feed them with positive thoughts. For instance, if you allow to weed with some unwanted plants it wouldn't give you any returns that is when your mind were full of negative thoughts. Negative thoughts drain your energy and make you feel exhausted and tired even when you worked only a little for the day.
  

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We are all born with the same resource s and from the same source. What makes certain people great from other /what separates certain people from others is how do they effectively use their mind. The mind is like a garden.

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  • We are all born with the same resource s and from the same source.
  • What makes certain people great from other /what separates certain people from others is how do they effectively use their mind.
  • The mind is like a garden.
  • It would give you more beautiful flowers more than expected if you know how to cultivate crops properly.
  • For instance, if you allow to weed with some unwanted plants it wouldn't give you any returns that is when your mind were full of negative thoughts (I don't understand) Negative thoughts drain your energy and make you feel exhausted and tired even when you have worked very little that day.
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We are all born with the same resources and from the same source. What makes certain people great from other/what separates certain people from others is how do they effectively use their mind. The mind is like a garden. It would give you more beautiful flowers more than expected
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Let me take a shot at this:
Sam28 We are all born with the same resources and from the same sources. What makes certain people greater than others is how effectively
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Thank you. Some sentences might sound unclear. The paragraph was more of a contextual one which I didn't write here.
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As is evident in my post above, the editor is really annoying.
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Surfer, thanks a lot. I have done so many mistakes Emotion: sad
SurferStill, I suggest you wait for a teacher's input on t
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Here is my two cents on the first two lines and I will leave the rest for others. .
Sam28What makes certain people great from others is how do they effectively use their mind.
What makes some people greater than others is how they effectively use their minds.
Sam28We all born with the same resource and from the same source
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