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Angliholic Posted 18 years ago
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Do you sometimes feel so overworked, stressed out and exhausted that it seems as if life is choking you and you can't even breathe?
1 i 00 Do you sometimes feel so overworked, stressed out and exhausted that it 00 seem 00 s as if life is choking you 00 00 and you can't even breathe? 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 Have you ever so overloaded that you stressed out and exhausted? It seems as if life is running out and you can hardly breathe. 02 i 00 02 br
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00 Hi, 02 br
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00 Does the second of the above two sound better? If not, how would you revise it? Thanks. 0-
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01 i 00 Have you ever so overloaded that you stressed out and exhausted? It seems as if life is running out and you can hardly breathe. 02 i 00 02 br
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00 Does the second of the above two sound better? If not, how would you revise it? Thanks. 0-
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- 0 The first is much better.
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0 The first is much better. It all fits in one sentence. 02 br
00 In the second sentence: "exhausted" needs a verb (were/became); I think "time" would run out rather than "life"; with out a comma after 'out', not being able to breathe is subordinate to 'seems'. 0-
00 In the second sentence: "exhausted" needs a verb (were/became); I think "time" would run out rather than "life"; with out a comma after 'out', not being able to breathe is subordinate to 'seems'. 0-
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