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Ayan86 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Do you see any mistakes here?
Hello!
Do you see any mistakes here?
In the Vedic epos Ramayana, it was the magical deer (demon Rama had turned himself into a deer) which caught the eye of Gita who wished to capture the creature and, therefore, to the satisfaction of Rama, he got to marry Gita.
Thank you a lot!
Do you see any mistakes here?
In the Vedic epos Ramayana, it was the magical deer (demon Rama had turned himself into a deer) which caught the eye of Gita who wished to capture the creature and, therefore, to the satisfaction of Rama, he got to marry Gita.
Thank you a lot!
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'Epic' is the normal term. Parenthetical comments, particularly when they do not intercalate with the matrix grammar, are generally unacceptable in formal writing. 'Gita' is a defining name, so the following clause should be non-restrictive.
- 'Epic' is the normal term.
- Parenthetical comments, particularly when they do not intercalate with the matrix grammar, are generally unacceptable in formal writing.
- 'Gita' is a defining name, so the following clause should be non-restrictive.
- 'Get to' is too informal for the rest of the text.
- There are too many commas in the latter part; it should be recast to minimize thern.
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'Epic' is the normal term.
Parenthetical comments, particularly when they do not intercalate with the matrix grammar, are generally unacceptable in formal writing.
'Gita' is a defining name, so the following clause should be non-restrictive.
'Get to' is too informal for the rest of the text.
There are too many commas in the latter part; it should be recast to minimize thern.
Parenthetical comments, particularly when they do not intercalate with the matrix grammar, are generally unacceptable in formal writing.
'Gita' is a defining name, so the following clause should be non-restrictive.
'Get to' is too informal for the rest of the text.
There are too many commas in the latter part; it should be recast to minimize thern.
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