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勝又圭 Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Do you prefer the "Change"?

Question

Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why

My essay

I believe that we should change continuously in order to make our society more convenient. These days, thanks to the cash disbursement under the situation of the declaration of a state of emergency in Japan, Japanese citizens realized how delayed the digitalization of Japan was. In this circumstance, there are many people with vested interests in analog products. People who have some kind of vested interests usually hope to stay the same. Owing to some pressure on the politicians from those people, the renewal of systems in our society has been delayed. Moreover, if we do not change permanently, systems of society will be disadvantageous to minority such as young people in an aging society. In order to make our society more convenient and diverse, I believe that we should not disturb alteration in our social systems.

  

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What you wrote is just a paragraph, not an essay. Are you practising for a particular test? If so, which one?

  • What you wrote is just a paragraph, not an essay.
  • Are you practising for a particular test?
  • If so, which one?
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What you wrote is just a paragraph, not an essay. Are you practising for a particular test? If so, which one?

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