Do you like any of these sentences?
1) Gloria walks to the window and looks out, impatiently waiting for Jack to show up.
2) Gloria walks to the window and looks out, waiting impatiently for Jack to show up.
3) Waiting impatiently for Jack to show up, Gloria walks to the window and looks out.
4) Gloria walks to the window and looks out, impatient for Jack to show up.
Do you like any of these sentences?
If not, what else could I say?
Thank you.
Top answer
Your sentences are all good. I like 3) the least. It sounds a little too academic for the subject matter because of the clause order.
- Your sentences are all good.
- I like 3) the least.
- It sounds a little too academic for the subject matter because of the clause order.
- CJ
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Your sentences are all good. I like 3) the least. It sounds a little too academic for the subject matter because of the clause order.
CJ
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