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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Do you like any of the two suggestions?
Hi. This is for a script.
The plane starts moving.
Next scene:
The plane has picked up speed, accelerating down the runway./Having picked up speed, the plane accelerates down the runway.
Do you like any of the two suggestions? Or do you have a better one? Thank you.
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pick up speed and accelerate have much the same meaning, so saying both is repetitious. Avoid repetition. Clive
- pick up speed and accelerate have much the same meaning, so saying both is repetitious.
- Avoid repetition.
- Clive
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pick up speed and accelerate have much the same meaning, so saying both is repetitious.
Avoid repetition.
Clive
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