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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Do you find this sentence of mine well-constructed or not?

Do you find this sentence of mine well-constructed or not?

I showed him the wound in my abdomen, but he didn’t mind at all. 
  

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but it didn't bother him at all. [ I mean that it didn't upset him as you might have expected it would. Does this make sense as an improvement?

— Philip

  • but it didn't bother him at all.
  • [ I mean that it didn't upset him as you might have expected it would.
  • Does this make sense as an improvement?
  • ]
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The sentence is well-constructed, but I would suggest a different ending, which may be what you are trying to say: ...but it didn't bother him at all. [ I mean that it didn't upset him as you might have expected it would. Does this make sense as an improvement? ]
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PhilipDoes this make sense as an improvement?
Yes, it does, Philip. Muchas gracias, señor.
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