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Liveinjapan Posted 16 years ago
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Do you agree with the opinion that

Lately, lots of people search things on the Internet. Do you agree with the opinion that paper books, dictionaries, etc. are no longer necessary thanks to the Internet?

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Lately, lots of people search things on the Internet. Do you agree with the opinion that paper books, dictionaries, etc. , are no longer necessary , thanks to the Internet?

— Mister Micawber

  • Lately, lots of people search things on the Internet.
  • Do you agree with the opinion that paper books, dictionaries, etc.
  • , are no longer necessary , thanks to the Internet?
  • It's fine, LIJ, except for 2 missing commas.
  • If I were doing it, I would shorten it, of course: M any people now search for information on the Internet.
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Lately, lots of people search things on the Internet. Do you agree with the opinion that paper books, dictionaries, etc., are no longer necessary, thanks to the Internet?

It's fine, LIJ, except for 2 missing commas. If I were doing it, I would shorten it, of course:

Many people now search for information on the Internet. Do you
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Thanks, Mr M. I learned a lot!
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