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Mahan84 Posted 3 years ago
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Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?

Today, celebrities are among not only the most famous people but also the richest. Many believe that they desreve the prodigious amount of money they make, which I tend to disagree.

Some argue that since celebrities are born with special talents, they deserve the fame and wealth they achieve. But I think they are still paid far too much compared to people in other professions. Consider nurses and teachers for example. Many of them have to work for a lifetime to make as much as a celebrities make in a month. In detail, recently teachers protested in streets in Iran voicing their complaint about their pitty salary, which is still as low as $150 a month. They cannot afford for their children for basic necessities of life, while celebrties are wasting large amounts of money on luxuries, which is undoubtedly unfair.

Some others argue that celebrities are not paid too much as they work passionately hard over long years to reach exceptional levels. But Some celebrities can also create their own brand to sell their products or become an ambassador for some brands, which help them to earn more money and reputation, that means in addition to acting, they can use their name and fame to earn money.

In conclusion , after analyzing both sides of the argument it is obvious that they must have the same salaries as a teacher or an nurses.

  

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Today, (with the present tense verb, the adverb is redundant.) Celebrities are among not only the most famous people but also the richest. Many believe that they desreve (wrong spelling) the prodigious amounts of money they make, which

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