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Creativeguru Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Do we need comma?
We at Genius World Tour Service are sure, we'll excel your expectations as we introduce you to the true joy of traveling with satisfaction and enjoyment.
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No comma. "excel your expectations" should be " exceed your expectations". "true joy of travelling with satisfaction and enjoyment" sounds a bit clunky to me.
- No comma.
- "excel your expectations" should be " exceed your expectations".
- "true joy of travelling with satisfaction and enjoyment" sounds a bit clunky to me.
- The "joy ...
- enjoyment" repetition is also noticeable.
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No comma.
"excel your expectations" should be "exceed your expectations".
"true joy of travelling with satisfaction and enjoyment" sounds a bit clunky to me. The "joy ... enjoyment" repetition is also noticeable. I would consider deleting "with satisfaction and enjoyment", or trying to think of a slicker replacement.
"excel your expectations" should be "exceed your expectations".
"true joy of travelling with satisfaction and enjoyment" sounds a bit clunky to me. The "joy ... enjoyment" repetition is also noticeable. I would consider deleting "with satisfaction and enjoyment", or trying to think of a slicker replacement.
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