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Autominus Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Do these three sentences sound natural and correct?

Hi,
I have a question? Do these three sentences sound natural and correct?

I am a very enthusiastic about life, open-minded, relaxed and tolerant person, who has a lot of hobbies. One of my biggest passion is travelling and discovering new cultures. I love to share smiles, opinions, experiences. For me this is a base of life. I enjoy listening to classical music very much, too.

Thank you in advance for your help.
  

Top answer

No. There are grammatical errors. It sounds like a quickly-assembled somewhat random list of phrases.

  • No.
  • There are grammatical errors.
  • It sounds like a quickly-assembled somewhat random list of phrases.
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No. There are grammatical errors.
It sounds like a quickly-assembled somewhat random list of phrases.
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autominus Hi,I have a question? Do these three sentences sound natural and correct?I am a very enthusiastic about life, open-minded, relaxed and tolerant person, who has a lot of hobbies. One of my biggest passion is travelling and discovering new cultures. I love to share smiles, opinions, experiences. For me this is a base of life. I enjoy listening to classical music v

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