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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Do these sentences read okay?

"Our software simplifies the registration of all types of drugs, accelerating time-to-market by 200% while cutting costs by at least 10%."

"Our software simplifies the registration of all types of drugs, accelerating time-to-market by 200% and cutting costs by at least 10%."


Thanks!

  

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Yes, they are both fine.

  • Yes, they are both fine.
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Yes, they are both fine.

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