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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Do these sentences flow together?

The brain itself is divided into two hemispheres: left and right. Joining these two hemispheres together is a row of commissural fibres called the corpus callosum, which until recently were thought to be responsible for causing epilepsy.

Are they grammatical? Do they flow together well?
  

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Anonymous Do these sentences flow together? Not so well; they can be improved. You need to trust more in your reader's intelligence and general knowledge.

  • Anonymous Do these sentences flow together?
  • Not so well; they can be improved.
  • You need to trust more in your reader's intelligence and general knowledge.
  • The brain is divided into left and right hemispheres connected by a row of commissural fibres called the corpus callosum, which until recently were thought to cause epilepsy.
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Anonymous Do these sentences flow together?
Not so well; they can be improved. You need to trust more in your reader's intelligence and general knowledge.

The brain is divided into left and right hemispheres connected by a row of commissural fibres called the corpus callosum, which until recently were thought to cause epilepsy.

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